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3 comments Alex Ji 1.I read first paragraph about Alex eassy, I have 2 comments for him. First comments, we just need wrote 100 words, no more and no less. Second comment is he talk about too much detail about his Chinese school and Winchendon school in first paragraph. Bichen Zhou 2. I read first paragraph about Peter eassy. In my opinion, I think he did very well, his paragraph has a topic sentence with controlling idea. I know he will talk about many diffenent things about his old school and Winchendon school.


 * //Trung Pham//**
 * //3. I read first paragraph about Trung eassy. I think his paragraph did not wrote topic sentence, also all of the sentences in the paragraph relate to the main topic.//**